The Jesseble

He was about 5'10" and sort've skinny and gangly. It would be 'sort of' not 'sort have' 8) His skin was peachy and rough, like the peel of an orange. ...

For a start i'd like to repeat the present tense view but then i'd be boring you as you have already heard it many times. At the moment, the paragraphs ...

Harry potter for books, and i think the films for both are good, im hooked on harry potter constantly, but i cant get into LOTR Agreed!! Harry Potter books are ...

As i sit alone and wonder, letting my thoughts drift into the abyss i watch the sun set it smoulders in the distance. The sea reluctantly bids it farewell and ...

I think English teachers are in love with John Steinbeck because at the moment I'm doing 'Of Mice and Men' for my exam. I think Johnm Steinbeck is a good ...

You certainly know how to set the scene and I get the vibes of the characters which is a good start. Though, i'm finding the story line a bit weak ...

Great Start! I don't normally kill off people in the first chapter but it works well. Seeing that the death of Jazool sort of defines the desperate situation that Phoryell ...